03 Oct

What has it done to me?

I used to read pages

Now just paragraphs.

I used to gasp at photos

Now I skim

What has it done to me?

Things used to scare me

Now I am placid

Moving images used to be a treat

Now I am bored without it

What has it done to me?

Stuck motionless without a pulse.


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7 responses to “Pulse

  1. charlesmashburn

    October 3, 2011 at 4:35 pm

    I know exactly what you mean! Very good write!

  2. The Cello Strings

    October 3, 2011 at 6:43 pm

    lovely comparison,

    I can relate, well done.

    Happy Poetry Picnic.

  3. Sarah Johnston

    October 4, 2011 at 5:24 pm

    It is hard to say what it has done to you but you have captured this feeling so well and such a great write thanks for sharing

  4. Morning

    October 5, 2011 at 3:25 am



  5. Shashi (@VerseEveryDay)

    October 5, 2011 at 12:48 pm

    loosing interest… with time… is quite an old ageing process.. and I hope that with creativity, you and every one can get out of it…

    Liked your verse..

    Thanks for sharing and for joining in the Poetry Picnic … Look forward to your posts on “Friends, Relationships and every one around..” next week …

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya

  6. eclipseofthemoon

    October 10, 2011 at 11:34 am

    A great description of the emotion, well done

  7. The Gooseberry Garden of Jingle Poetry

    December 7, 2011 at 3:47 am

    How is your day?

    Time flies, appreciated your handsome inputs to our poetry picnic.

    Share a poem today.
    Bless you.
    Happy December,
    Enjoy A Wonderful Wednesday Ahead.



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